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"Extras" Chapter 1: Un-Luck-ee

01/29/09

“Am i the problem?” This was Van’s last question when his girlfriend broke up with him. It was “terrible” as if it was the worst day of his life. By instance, it was; giving credit to his efforts to have his first girlfriend. For 21 years of his life, he experienced the thing called “L-word” (as his friends say).

He was born with the disease NGSB (No Girlfriend, So Back off!) that was why he had no girlfriend/s since high school and in college. He was concentrating in his studies and he had no time for such. Until he found out that he was “gay”..happy in definition. He was gay in his life and status. But one day, he met XY..(weird name isn’t it?) She was 4′10″ in sitting height, vital stats 36-24-36, 20, a fresh nursing graduate and a one hot brunette. She was every guy’s dream girl, the girl next door, and a porn star of their fantasies.

Their paths crossed inside the hospital when Van was asking for inquiries about the floor plan of the hospital. He accidentally bumped into XY’s “future”. Blushing, Van apologized and asked her out. Making the long story very short, they were on and after five months, this conversation happened:

(At the edge of a cliff) 

XY:”My life was ruined because of you! It’s better to end this fast than to take the pain slowly.”

Van:”Pag sure dinha oi..pagtarung ba, unsa may problema?”

XY:”You’re very insensitive, this past months you always think about your happiness, your urges. Can’t you stop and think about me for a while?”

Van:”Heller? karun diay kinsa akung gina huna2x…pag think sad panagsa uy..Am i the problem?”

When XY heard that line, it enraged her. She ran towards Van and pulled him off. She pulled him off stronger than expected. Van was pushed off and was going to………he fell..

“Am i still alive?” Van still felt his legs and arms…he opened his eyes….

“ay..pagka na lang..damgo ra man diay..”

-END-

Chapter 2 *next post* 

“Extras” is a compilation of short stories originally written by ME yes, me..hehehe…lol, rofl, lmao.. 

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Previous Comments

what can i say? if you prsonally made that story well then its crazy. totally new but a fantastic one.
uhm. it was frustrating sa last part knowing that it was a whole lot of dream and ugh., guys na NGSB aren’t gay MOST of the time. trust me. haha. cuz i know a lot. although i have poor GAY “radar,” (its a long story)..

you’re really articulate. as in. and i should say i envy you for that. i write but im really afraid that people would see th bad side of my writing. you know grammar stuff, sentence construction. ugh. i work bad in english. but wow, you inspired me to make my own blog. and im actually starting to write something on it.

haha. til here.

Posted by cherry at January 30, 2009, 11:05 am